1. Script looking good Tom :)
    Just a couple of points to keep it professional-looking; on the title page, you have 'Based on, if any' and a space for your address and phone number - edit these out, as they are features that you don't need. Also, capital letters for your name :)
    Looking forward to seeing how this pans out in the storyboard :D

  2. good job ward :) love you shmookybum <3 xoxo


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